Ryan Gorman and Luke Bowers have come to an agreement that we really liked your thiller opening and feel that you have listened to the feedback you were given by the other groups and have changed your thriller in a good way.
The music really suited the atmopshere of your thriller narrative and worked really well together. We thought the way your credits appeared and disappeared suited the genre perfectly also.
Overall we thought this was very very good and is a very good example of a thriller opening.
Well Done. :D